maybe something that is written about (I don’t know) but something that is mundane – very late – but I bumped into Val yesterday in Tesco’s car park and I have challenged her to post in the next couple of weeks – so here goes …..

 

God sat down in his conservatory
and noticed the world was full of washing
his view was full of washing

so God invented Silicone Valley
and blessed it with sunshine
blue skies and cartoon trees

the washing dried quickly
man played outside in the fresh air
God had a lovely view

but man got bored with fresh air
it was hot and it made him irritable
so he went inside

inside was boring
there was no fresh air
and nothing to do

so God invented technology
gave man the remote control
and air conditioning

man bought himself a larder fridge
drank ice-cold beer
and everyone was happy

until God sent man a bill
which he could not pay
so man worked overtime

he was tired after work
too tired to do his washing
and then he noticed his wife had left him

on Monday morning
man went to work grumpy rude
the boss texted God asking for help

God missed the message
he was outside in the fresh air
pegging out his washing

3 responses

  1. Wow! 3 in one month – I didn’t realise Tesco’s car park was so inspirational, must try it sometime.

    I do hope you will continue on the CBP website after you have moved to Scotland – I will miss you!

  2. you never know I might even make a start on August’s prompt some time soon – was it the car park or was it Val – or was it the fact that I am supposed to be packing to move?

    – I’ll ask permission from the committee – I will definitely be across the border – maybe I could start a sub-group called ACBP(Scotland) – only joking

    – now that you are a published poet Jonathan you might end up doing readings in Scotland – if so let me know – you would be more than welcome to crash out at our place – the world is your haggis

  3. Love the circularity of this poem, Sarah. Maybe to be consistent man should begin with a capital or God begin with lower case.

    I agree with Jonathan – we’ll miss you! Please continue to cross borders!

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