Challenge
Life is full of challenges
If you are alive –
why don’t you challenge life?
Instead of trudging along the same old path
as your long dead forefathers,
complaining and grumbling,
instead of overthrowing
their unreasonable attitudes.
Great take on grumbling! Like the twist at the end. Could you use the first line as the title d’you think?
Good idea to use the first line as a title .Ta.