Clouded vision
Filthy, my shop window.
I can’t see out,
no-one can see in.
No wonder I’m doing
no business.
It’s that polluted air
out there that’s to blame.
Call the window cleaner,
he’ll do the trick.
That’s him I can hear
clanking about outside.
Ladders, cloths, pails,
clean water to wash away
all that muck.
He’s done, departed.
But look, I still can’t see out,
still nobody can see
what’s on offer in here.
Oh, what I can now see
is that there’s grime
on this side of the glass, too.
Sounds like my house! Fun poem.
Should’ve gone to SpecSavers!
and now challenge yourself to play with the poem and rewriting it without using words like “see” and see how far you get …