The house is taciturn.
Secrets have settled under dust.
You left in the middle of December
leaving a mug of tea, a half read
magazine and washing up
shipwrecked in the sink.
The innards of the house lie in
piles outside the front door like
discarded offal. The ghost of a
Brahms sonata sighs around the
dismembered piano. Yellow crime tape
flaps in the wind like a Tibetan prayer flag.
I wish for a light at the window,
a steaming kettle,
singing from the bathroom
and a reason for your leaving.
Wow, great last stanza. Very good poem, Diana. I think the line breaks in the first stanza need a bit of tweaking. Great.
some great images!
Send it off!
This is very good, Diana. I like the mystery and, echoing Robbie, a great last stanza. Yes, have another look at the line breaks…