Two rocks, a tide race, walls of water.
Mouthful of salt, breath of heather.
Slap of wave, a nose diving gannet.
Seal pups mewing in hidden coves.
Yellow canoe negotiating
the tightrope between sea and sky.
Two rocks, a tide race, walls of water.
Mouthful of salt, breath of heather.
Slap of wave, a nose diving gannet.
Seal pups mewing in hidden coves.
Yellow canoe negotiating
the tightrope between sea and sky.
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Love the last line. Do you need ‘a nose’?
Lovely!
So much movement and energy in concise lines. Like the yellow canoe to give me a focus point.
This is definitely your voice and as expected includes a lovely reference to colour. Making it less (than normal) on this occasion – makes it stronger (for me).