Every Friday afternoon in Chop Square
Crowd jostles
Crowd pushes
Crowd shoves
Screams
Crack
Crowds surge forward
The moan
Head rolls
A victim beheaded in Chop Square
In Riyadh
Saudi Arabia
An ordinary city square
Every Friday afternoon in Chop Square
Crowd jostles
Crowd pushes
Crowd shoves
Screams
Crack
Crowds surge forward
The moan
Head rolls
A victim beheaded in Chop Square
In Riyadh
Saudi Arabia
An ordinary city square
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The form you’ve chosen fits the poem really well. I think maybe the final line could be omitted, the images are enough. Perhaps the penultimate line could lose ‘In’?