His ten-year-old legs went walkabout
without him. Don’t move, they said,
as he lay like a plank, sentenced
to six months horizontal, pillowless
waiting for the needle man.
Later, he sat on his bed, waiting
for muscles to return to childish pranks,
to seaside convalescence with a family
who frowned when he licked the sauce bottle
and kicked the boys into howling submission.
And there was a bike, a bucking bronco
that rose and fell, rose and fell beneath him
until his legs mastered its waywardness,
spurred it across the grass of the local park
until it was part of his being.
Fab! Love ‘the needle man’, the surprises of the sauce bottle and howling submission. My only slight reservation is the final line… ‘his being’… there’s something… I’m not sure… a bit poetic about it?
Probably! It was originally just ‘him’ but that sounded a bit weak. I’ll think on’t.
I like the fact that it is all a great adventure – not a story which dwells on negatives.