I knew you’d be late. You’re always late.
The shrinks say it’s a power thing.

I watched a fly emerge from morning lethargy
into a frenetic map reading of the window.

In beads of condensation
it traced an outline of the Orkneys
detailing the ring of Brodgar.
Admittedly it missed out
one or two of the thirty six stones
but the gist was there.

It starting buzzing in D.
I made out the notes
of the Deerness reel
and starting swaying.

I got an odd look from
a man with egg on his boot.
Reluctantly I had to agree
that the tune had been played better.

An hour and a half later
with a flamboyant excuse
of the dog eating the train ticket
I turned and sashayed from the café
and headed North for Orkney.

3 responses

  1. This is fab, Di! Very enjoyable. Vivid images, rhythms (as we’ve come to expect!).. every line ending spot on… surprises in in every stanza. The only place I stumbled was with the syntax in the 2nd & 3rd lines of the final stanza… Not sure you need ‘flamboyant’ – it’s a bit telling – and, bearing in mind the first couplet, I’m not sure who is making the excuse.

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