Scintillating Drops

 

It is not as we imagined.

It is not as we were told.

The dendritic agent is fluid as we deduced,

and flows strongly away from higher territories,

but the surface seems alive.

It sings and small drops dance above it,

twinkling in the rays of the sun.

Dimples and rills catch the light

and mesmerize onlookers.

It is never still; sparkling and shimmering,

frothing over rocks.

I watched it fall from a great height

thundering and splashing,

creating a mist and a rainbow.

The colours we never see.

 

In lands where there is little of what they call water

the resemblance to home is dramatic.

Grey and red dust accumulate and the green is missing.

The inhabitants are trying to placate the gods.

They choose a city and knock down all the buildings

make craters in the road, and light many,

many votive fires around the rubble;

the grey plumes of smoke billowing high above them.

Then they sacrifice each other, trying to wet

the bare earth with their red, red blood.

Thousands make pilgrimages to the coast,

and drown themselves to tell the gods of their plight.

 

But I could tell them that once they lose

the blue and the green from their planet

it will never return. The gods are not listening.

I could tell them of our tragic past

but…

3 responses

  1. I notice that all your poems are double line spaced – you can avoid this if you hold down the shift key when you press return. That said I like this ‘martian’ poem. I never ‘got’ most of Craig Raine’s martian poems, but this is quite clear and succinct. It shows us up for the idiots we are.

  2. Thanks Keith. I was afraid to ask again how to get rid of the double spacing. Day 3 subs is single spaced!
    Thanks for the comment – nice to know you think the meaning is clear.

  3. Yes, loud and clear! A great take on our current horribleness… Great ending too…

    On a more technical note, I’ve found that if you paste a poem into ‘text’ rather than ‘visual’ it doesn’t put in double-spacing. Also, you can make it indent by clicking the ‘ul’ tab before and after the indented part. Mind you, if you then look at it in ‘visual’ it all goes horribly wrong. So now I stick to ‘text’.

    I only discovered that today… so you might need to play with it!

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